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Unknowing 10: The Warehouse by dclouis, literature

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Unknowing 10: The Warehouse

This chapter is rated PG-13 for mild swearing and almost-sex. Viewer discretion is advised. Chapter 10: The Warehouse It's just a house of wares, and various other things. At first, I thought the gunshots were being aimed at us, but that idea was quickly dismissed when the men in red fell around us. The men closer to the exits were running at us, their guns desperately searching for something to shoot back at, but none of them could find the intruder. Neither could I. From the way the gang members dropped, I calculated that whoever was here was currently high up behind me. I shook around in my binding, trying to get a better view, and sai

Unknowing 09: Red Apples by dclouis, literature

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Unknowing 09: Red Apples

Chapter 9: Red Apples Tovv Myrid Outer beauty cannot ever create inner beauty. Maybe, I'm a little too angry. Maybe, I'm never angry enough. Anger confuses me. It's that emotion that everyone must feel, but nobody wants to, like sadness or fear. But without fear, we would all be dangerous, and without sadness, we would all be heartless. What about living without anger, though? What then? We would all be… happy? Positive? Cheerful? There are so many opposites of angry. They didn't sound so bad to me. I watched Rauri leave with Chelsea, and a small part of me faded away with him. Dramatic, huh? But it was true. Posèp stood beside

Unknowing 08: Trouble In Paradise by dclouis, literature

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Unknowing 08: Trouble In Paradise

Chapter 8: Trouble in Paradise What do you do if Hell is your paradise? The sun was beginning to descend behind the buildings when we reached the next stop. Walking alongside her was like a dream, but a good dream, not like the others. I felt high, all the way up in those white, puffy clouds, and the world was tinted with a light coat of perfection. There it was: that untouched house; the grass of the yard was still gleaming with dew; its siding, still creamy white. I had always wondered what happened to the serenity of the house, but now I have found it in her. The walk was long and slow because of my crutched body, but she did not seem t

Unknowing 07: Home by dclouis, literature

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Unknowing 07: Home

Part II: The Search Chapter 7: Home Home is where the heart is. One and a half months passed before I could start to move around and find out what happened. The first one I saw was Tovv. She had been sitting in my hospital room for almost the entire time I was there, waiting every night for me to wake up. Every night she was dissatisfied by my recovery, even though the doctors and nurses assured her that I would be fine after some time. It was against hospital regulations for guests to stay with patients overnight—they made her an exception after the first week of her banging on the doors making a huge fuss. Most of the doctors told

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Feb 13, 2012

So, I've decided to start a blog with my artwork instead of using Deviantart. Shocking, right? Well, I just didn't feel satisfied. My artwork really isn't being seen by too many people; I feel like I'm being smothered by everyone else's mundane doodles. I get it. Doodles can be creative, but I feel like my art is bound and gagged by them. I'm trying to tell a story with my art, people. How can it be heard if its voice is getting drowned out by everyone else screaming? In my blog, I can showcase my art and my writing and it can stand out on its own. Here is the link to my blog. I have no art on it yet, but I'm planning to post art and storie

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About dclouis

Artist // Hobbyist // Literature

Apr 13
United States
Deviant for 12 years
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I'm going to begin posting more on my new blog. I'll leave all that is uploaded on DA here, but from now on, my life is going to be here:

Favourite Movies

Classic Disney Movies, Musical-Based, Rent, Horrors, A Perfect Getaway, Final Destination, Cheesy Romantic-Comedies, Action, Mystery

Favourite TV Shows

Scooby-Doo, Tosh.0, Family Guy, The Biggest Loser, Classic Pokemon, World's Dumbest..., Wipeout

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

Red Hot Chili Peppers, Journey, Fall Out Boy, Goo Goo Dolls, P!nk, Eminem, Three Days Grace, Queen, My Chemical Romance, Mumford and Sons, 30 Seconds to Mars,

Favourite Books

Hamlet, The Hunger Games, The Mortal Instruments, Romeo & Juliet, A Midsummer Night's Dream, Harry Potter

Favourite Writers

William Shakespeare, Cassandra Clare, Suzanne Collins

Favourite Games

Uncharted, Final Fantasy (VII,X, X-2, XI, XIII), The Sims, Silent Hill, Animal Crossing, Dragon Age, Star Ocean, Crash Bandicoot, Spyro

Favourite Gaming Platform

Playstation (1, 2, and 3), PC, Wii

Tools of the Trade

Pencil, Voice Box, Keyboard

Other Interests

Acting, Singing, Hiking, Drawing, Writing, Swimming, Adventuring

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Nov 4, 2011

Sneak Preview ~ (Updated 1/20)

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So, I've got some lines from the upcoming chapters of Unknowing to tease anyone who somehow wanders onto my profile and to build suspense for anyone waiting patiently or impatiently for the next chapter to arrive. Chapter 9 ~ He was more of the over-protective older brother whereas Rauri was always more of a best friend. It was a strange transformation he made when nobody else was around, like he became himself, and I was the only one who knew this side of him. This Posep knew what to say, no matter what, and I think that's what I loved most about him. Now was no exception. My eyes followed a small cloud directly above me. It was shaped li

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Oct 30, 2011

W00t! Journal Entry!

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Hooray! Another journal entry. Hopefully, my echo doesn't show up this time. So, it's Halloween weekend, and I still have no idea what to dress up as... so... But anyways, I've decided to make a feature journal, unfortunately, I am a n00b and don't know how to actually get pictures into my post... meh, so here are the rules: Be one of the first 10 people commenting on this journal entry, and I will link you and put 3 of your deviations I like best in the post. IMPORTANT: If you do comment, you're expected to do the same in your own journal; putting me on the first place :3 1. Morningtreader :thumb265068977: Dean from Morningtreader's upc

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Oct 25, 2011

Firsttt~~~ (also some random awesomeness)

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So, I can dig it. Here's my first journal entry... Nobody's really here yet, that's probably expected, since I just started devianting a few hours ago. I have James! (thanks buddy) Hmm, so, I'm about to watch the Sing-Off (AHHH LOVE!!!!)and maybe I'll post another chapter of Unknowing. By the way. anyone who somehow wanders onto mylly, this profile needs to read it. Even if you just skim it, I want you to comment on at least on of the chapters, probably the prologue first... They are all in my gallery. I'm probably gonna advertise on facebook... and gaia... and... nevermind, that's it. Lalala, ranting. Actually, this is more of a long, repeti

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Feb 18, 2012

psssst! patience is Killing me!

Feb 21, 2012

I'm so sorry!! D: I'm going through a rough patch in my life. I'm not going to be writing for a while, and I'm probably not going to post anymore. I will however give you a treat and send you the last public chapter (Chapter 11) when I finish it. Also, I will post periodic updates about it on my blog (thethoughtlessboy.blogspot.com) but the ending is going to be in print before anyone sees it. Thank you so, so, so much for reading, and I love you so much for being with me from the beginning. :'D

Feb 22, 2012

<3 I'm sorry I hope things get better for you.
thanks , & I'll be sure to buy it when it's in print!

You're very welcome && I love you for writing such an amazing book!
Good luck <3

Dec 5, 2011

Time to harass you for the next chapter!!! I've been patient!!

Dec 5, 2011

Lol, I know. I'm getting writers block for Chapter 9, because its such a darn difficult chapter to write. I'll post Chapter 7 later tonight, then Chapter 8 in a few days to let 7 sink in. Maybe you could help me figure out how to write chapter 9 since I'm so completely uninspired. >.<

Dec 6, 2011

After I read I'll be able to make suggestions